She was a little kid They told her Take care of others But did they ever ask How are you? They told her You’re full of love But did they ever tell You must learn to hate too? They told her You have a pretty face But did they ever say There are acid attackers too? They told her You should love others But did they ever teach How to love yourself? It’s been a long time She has grown up now Living like a lifeless Sitting in the corner of room As mature as ‘They’ were back then They told her so many things But why Not everything? Where are they now? Do they even know Where is she now? Asking only one question “Did they care for me?” Wait.. she have one more “Did they even ever love me?” Suddenly heard a whisper Saw a shadow of a little girl “Hm.. I looked same as her back then” Afraid of the truth The shadow went near her And answered her questions As quick as the wind blows.. “No, they never did!” She falls on the floor -Poorwa
So touching and powerful Poorwa. You’ve very skilfully taken off the veneer of hypocrisy. It is painful, and appreciated. The lines make many of us hang our heads in shame, don’t they ?👌🙏
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Thanks a lot!
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Thank you Pannaga ❤️
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Very well written poorwa 👏👏👏👏👏 you did a great job in this one ❤❤
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Thank you so much di❤️❤️❤️
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Very well written. This awesome^1000000000000000
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Thanks a lot Akshita❤️
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Very well written!! ❤️
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Thank you!!!
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Wonderful strong writing! ❤️
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Thanks ellie❤️
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Wow, this is really good! It’s very touching too.
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Thank you so much!
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Hey do you have a WP blog?
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Hi! No, I don’t have a WP blog ’cause I use my school computer and it’s blocked on it. *shrugs*
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Oh I see!
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This poem hits so close to home ❤️. I love it!
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Oh really!? Thank you!
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Omg! What a lovely poem Poorwa. (No I am serious, it is lovely and deep) 😊❤️💕
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😃 it means a lot And❤️
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Such a heart touching poem❤️❤️❤️
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Thank you 🤗
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Such a lovely poem Poorwa!! I am serious it’s lovely and deep!! It’s really touching
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Aww thank you so much Maya❤️
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Btw, why you don’t allow comments on your blog? It’s okay if you don’t want to, I was just wondering.
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I just do not want to lol
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Ah no problem then
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This is great!
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Many thanks for stopping by ❤️
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Aw,It’s alright! I’m a blogger too and it gives me great joy to support other bloggers ❤
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I’ll make sure to visit your blog asap!
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🙂 Thanks!
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Like I said before this is seriously amazing and deep!! M saying it again ❤️😊 but yeah that same thing RHYMING SCHEME. Like I see many bloggers don’t face that problem. It’s ok if you do just try finding new words… and you will see ur vocabulary grow and poems will be better. But yeah this is truly amazing. Just try using too, you a little less times. I try not using it at all. Instead I find new words to match with you and too. All the best ❤️
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Ah I see! Thanks a lot❤️❤️❤️
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This one is deep and magical! Loved it!
I really really think you should write more often!
Maybe you could write a poem about dogs- or your dogs, if you haven’t done that before. It is really fun. Or even one AS your dogs.
Amazing post!
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Aww thanks so much for reading, Stara! You’re such an amazing poet and your appreciation means a lot to me.
Nice idea! I’ve never tried it but will definitely write one now.
Thanks!!!
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