Rollercoaster Ride
Some dreams
Too far from reach
Still I treasure them each

See a rollercoaster ride
Waiting over there
Is it for me?

Maybe that's the way
I go there excitedly
At least that's what I pray
Then why do I feel nervous and lonely?

They tell me to stop
But how could I?
Now it goes up and up

These feelings are strange
Sweet turns into bitter
Why didn't I know?
Why didn't I listen?

My tears float with it
As it comes down now
My smile was crying

What I realize
It brings you up
With hopes and light
Little did I know
Only dark tears come down

The ride is still there
But nothing to see above
My dreams were there
Now they are no more

-Poorwa

Sometimes we are so excited to reach our goals that we unknowingly take the wrong way which seems to be fun and short. As the rollercoaster goes up we start to regret our decision and realize that this way is going to bring us down with even double speed. But it doesn’t mean your dreams were wrong, yes the path was not right and there’s always a way which will lead you to your dreams, it may not be too fun and may be very long with struggles but you’ll find the beauty of it later. The people who try to stop us can be parents or our well-wishers who are not always wrong as we think. We think it’s the worst when they care too much about us but actually, the worst is when they don’t care at all.


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26 responses to “Rollercoaster Ride”

  1. Soumi Avatar
    Soumi

    Beautiful theme Poorwa! ♡♡♡

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  2. Stara Avatar

    OMG! Btw that is a good omg.
    THAT WAS SUCH A BEAUTIFUL POEM!
    MYY GOD!
    I-
    I-
    I have no words for its beauty.
    I have seen so much on ur blog but never before a poem. I seriously loved reading this and I think you should write more often!

    ♥💖✨

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    1. Poorwa Vishwakarma Avatar

      Oh my… thank you soooo much Stara 💖 You made my day!!!
      Yeah I like to try poems sometimes 😄 You can check out more of my writings here👇
      https://atlaswebdesigns.design.blog/category/writings/

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      1. Stara Avatar

        Noiice! I will look a them later but they sound amazing!!!

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      2. Stara Avatar

        But srsly your writing is talented. I love how you put the words and I can imagine every single word you put in the poem coming to life!!!

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      3. Stara Avatar

        You not your writing😂

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      4. Stara Avatar

        Ah I was typing fast…
        You are talented at writing is what I meant😶

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      5. Poorwa Vishwakarma Avatar

        oh that’s fine, thnx

        Like

      6. Poorwa Vishwakarma Avatar

        this is the sweetest comment I ever got on my poems thanks so much girl!

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      7. Stara Avatar

        Awww I am glad!

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  3. Ashish - Proxywords Avatar

    Loved the analogy Poorwa. Nice positive post! ♥️♥️

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    1. Poorwa Vishwakarma Avatar

      Thank you very much Ashish 😊
      Long time! Hope you’re doing well!

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      1. Ashish - Proxywords Avatar

        Welcome. Haha yes i am doing well just didn’t get time to visit WP recently. Hope you are doing well too!

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      2. Poorwa Vishwakarma Avatar

        Ah I get that. Yes i am, I recently started posting again after a long time as my finals ended.

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      3. Ashish - Proxywords Avatar

        Ohh then we are on the same page. Glad someone is with me 🙂🙂

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  4. Rose Avatar

    Lovely poem!

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  5. Candy🍫 Avatar
    Candy🍫

    Beautifully penned! How can someone write so beautifully!

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    1. Poorwa Vishwakarma Avatar

      Aww thank you so much ❤🥺

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      1. Candy🍫 Avatar
        Candy🍫

        You’re welcome ❤️

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  6. DEVANG UPADHYAYA Avatar

    Great work 👏🏻

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