The right path
On the way of life
You have to see your goals clear
Doesn't matter if you're stuck now
Someday time will lead you there

If you want to reach the peak
Don't be scared from height
Don't be scared from fallling
If you want to fly high

It's okay if they praise you
Should be okay if they curse you
Become stronger with your every step 
Mistakes will be gonna teach you too

Don't give up, never stop and go on
Magic will happen like those fairytales

You know we choose our own heroes
Up to you, it's you or someone else.

-Poorwa

Hey friends! I hope you liked reading my small verse. Thanks for reading. I just stopped by to make a quick announcement about my blogging schedule. Since I got my time-table for my final exams, I’m making a very small change. I just changed the days when there won’t be any new posts. So my new schedule is…

New posts everyday except Wednesdays and Saturdays at 4:00 PM IST. (I know it’s Saturday today but we will continue according to our new schedule from now on)

One more thing: I’m open for guest posts on my blog, so if you are interested feel free to contact me via: poorwavishwakarma24@gmail.com


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32 responses to “The right path”

  1. Pavithra Avatar

    Great lines!! 😃

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  2. vaniheart Avatar
    vaniheart

    A beautiful and very inspiring poem poorwa 💟💟👏👏👏

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    1. Poorwa Vishwakarma Avatar

      Thanks so much ❤️❤️

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  3. akshita1776 Avatar

    Uplifting poem!!

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  4. Maya Avatar

    Lovely poem

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      1. Maya Avatar

        Your welcome!

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  5. iamswiftwalker Avatar
    iamswiftwalker

    Awesome!!!!

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    1. Poorwa Vishwakarma Avatar
  6. nushhe Avatar

    Loved it! 💛💛💛

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Poorwa Vishwakarma Avatar

      Thanks girl 🤗❤️

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  7. Mahitha Avatar

    I love your verse, Poorwa!!! <3 Also, I sent you an email! ;)

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    1. Poorwa Vishwakarma Avatar

      Thank you ❤️
      Okay I’m checking!

      Like

  8. maggie Avatar
    maggie

    Aw beautiful poem Poorwa! 💜

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    1. Poorwa Vishwakarma Avatar

      Thank you ❤️❤️

      Like

  9. Athira Avatar

    Wonderful line Poorwa..
    How are you?

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    1. Poorwa Vishwakarma Avatar

      Thanks Athira!
      I’m good, just preparing for my exams these days 😊 how are you?

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  10. Athira Avatar

    Most welcome and I’m fine dear..
    Thanks for asking..
    All the very best for the exams

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  11. Athira Avatar

    Welcome Poorwa

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  12. nushhe Avatar

    Hey poorwa you asked me to review ur poems too!! 😀❤️ Well I am honoured to do that… Well you see your poem is marvellous but I advice you to try making your poems rhyming. Your theme is wonderful as always and I feel that sometimes you run out of words to rhyme your poem don’t you? Cause this happens with me. Try going to Google and type rhyming words with suppose let’s take Bat. And there you can always use new profound words to improve your vocabulary and make your poem eye catching.. (don’t take it in any bad way! Like I always say. I love poetry and can help anyone to improve and be the best) 😊

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    1. Poorwa Vishwakarma Avatar

      Aw thank you so much Anu! Will work on it! Again, thanks so much!

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      1. nushhe Avatar

        No problem!

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  13. Stara Avatar

    Amazing poem- it is really inspiring!!!

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    1. Poorwa Vishwakarma Avatar

      I’m so glad! And thanks so much for all the comments, I think I’ll have a very good sleep tonight thanks to you.

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