My First Poem in Hindi
गिर न जाना कहीं कि
कि दुनिया बेसहारा समझ ले
तुम गिर न जाना कहीं कि
कि दुनिया बेसहारा समझ ले
कोई जो हाथ देने आ भी गया
वो भी मदद कि जगह
सौदा ही करेगा

थाम लेना तुम हाथ खुद ही का
थाम लेना तुम हाथ खुद ही का
राह दिखने को तारे बहुत हैं
चाँद की बात अब क्या ही करें
भरोसा उस पर थोड़ा ही करना
एक दिन वो भी तुम्हें छोड़
कहीं छिप जायेगा

-पूर्वा

Translation:

don't fall down
that the world may consider you helpless
lest you fall
that the world may consider you helpless
whoever that comes to lend a hand
that too in place of help
will make a deal

hold your own hand
hold your own hand
There are many stars to guide the way
What can we say about the moon now?
trust him little
one day he too will leave you
one day he too will hide somewhere

- Poorwa

Hey pals! So you just read my first ever poem in Hindi. Did you like it? This post is actually two weeks late, I wanted to post it sooner but I kept having doubts whether I should do it or not. I don’t really have much knowledge of Hindi poetry style and I didn’t want mine to sound more like a shayari than a poem so I kept editing the lines. But I’m happy with how it turned out at last.

Thanks for reading!


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15 responses to “My First Poem in Hindi”

  1. Pavithra Avatar

    Omg I love every line. We need more hindi poems from you!! ❤️❤️

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    1. Poorwa Avatar

      🙈🙈aww thanks Pavi ❤️✨
      I’ll definitely try to write more

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  2. Pavithra Avatar

    Loveee the message!!

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    1. Poorwa Avatar

      💖💖💖thank you ily

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  3. Niv Avatar

    Itni acchi thi poem pata nahi kya bolun, mujhe bohut pasand aaya😭💕
    Aur aise likhte rehna✨abhi abhi hindi board khatam hua aur unseen poem par itni naaraj thi, ise padhkar laga ki poems are gorgeous, uske upar aane waala qs bekaar hai😂

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    1. Poorwa Avatar

      Sach me!?? Thank you nivi ✨💕
      Haa aur try krungi.
      😂😂Ikr!? “Kavi ka kya aashay h spasht kre” 🤣

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  4. Pramod Avatar
    Pramod

    Wonderful poorwa !
    Kon sa yad ma ho yar 😊 Jo bhi ho Kavita aacha ha

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    1. Poorwa Avatar

      Kuch khaas nhi 😉
      Thanks for reading, pramod

      Like

  5. Selene Washington Avatar

    Wow, Poorwa! ✨ The Hindi characters are beautiful. 🤍 You truly have a way with words. ✨ Your poems continue to amaze me, and they have me pondering. 💭 I can see you doing poetry readings too. 📝🎤✨

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    1. Poorwa Avatar

      Thank you so much Selene 💕✨ I said this before and I’ll say it again, you’re one of the reasons I keep writing ❤️ tqsm!

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  6. Cindy Georgakas Avatar

    This is a brilliant poem, Poorwa~! Love the last stanza.. These are great lines”

    “hold your own hand
    hold your own hand
    There are many stars to guide the way”👏👏💓

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    1. Poorwa Avatar

      Aww it means the world to me❤️ I’m so glad that you liked my poem. Thank you💓

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      1. Cindy Georgakas Avatar

        Sooo happy to hear that! I loved it.. you’re most welcome❣️

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  7. anushkawriter69 Avatar

    Loved your poem keep posting more💗

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    1. Poorwa Avatar

      Thank you so very much Anushka!
      Yes, I’ll definitely post more!

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