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Strange Feelings

Strange Feelings
No one can understand
Wonder if even I can
It was all unplanned
Now I’m drowning in the river

Don’t wanna save myself
Just want to let it be
Remember those fairytale elves
I’ve tried to set me free

Will it be alright?
Guess nothing’s even wrong right now
Maybe it was all over my might
Would be useless to ask you, how?

Feeling confused
Don’t know what to do
Accepting it all
Makes me dive in the blue

I know it’s all confusing
It’s okay if you don’t understand
This pain will be my cure

I want to come back
Wanna fix the broken ceilings
But something’s stopping me
What if you could see? 

I need to get out, I need to leave

Will you give me your hand
When all I have is this need
Trust me, I’m begging

To fight these strange feelings? 

-Poorwa



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43 responses to “Strange Feelings”

  1. مايا (Maya) Avatar

    Beautiful poem ❤️

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  2. Shweta Suresh Avatar

    That’s such a heart-wrenching poem, Poorwa. Beautifully written

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    1. Poorwa Vishwakarma Avatar

      Thank you so much ❤️ It means a lot!

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      1. Shweta Suresh Avatar

        My pleasure 😃

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  3. Saumya B Avatar

    That’s such a deep poem Poorwa dear! I’ll always lend you my hand if you feel alone!! This was so so mesmerizing 💗💗

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    1. Poorwa Vishwakarma Avatar

      Thank you so much Saumya 💕 Aw that’s so sweet of you😭
      And I just read your guest post on Moksha’s blog, it was amazing! Loved it!

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      1. Saumya B Avatar

        Thank you so much ❣️

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  4. Pavithra Avatar

    So deep!! As always, beautifully written poorwa ❤️

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    1. Poorwa Vishwakarma Avatar

      Thank you so much Pavithra❤️

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  5. akshita1776 Avatar

    So deep, raw and beautiful❤
    I am here if you feel alone(●’◡’●)

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    1. Poorwa Vishwakarma Avatar

      Thank you Akshita!!! That’s so sweet of you, thank you so much❤️

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  6. Priyadarshni Sahu Avatar

    Wow very nice you are amazing 👏 ❤

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      1. Priyadarshni Sahu Avatar

        Most welcome 🙏 ☺

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  7. Filarance Avatar

    Wowwww..! It’s very beautiful and fantastic poem dear poorwa..! You’re such a Amazing poet..!🤗💕

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    1. Poorwa Vishwakarma Avatar

      Aww thank you so much Filarance❤️❤️❤️ means a lot!

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      1. Filarance Avatar

        Most welcome dear..! It’s my pleasure..!❤️

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  8. anushkawriter69 Avatar

    It’s such a beautiful poem…
    You are an amazing poet. Keep it up.. ❤

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    1. Poorwa Vishwakarma Avatar

      Thanks a lot Anushka 😊

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  9. Maya Rajesh Avatar

    This was such a lovely poem :)) Great post!

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    1. Poorwa Vishwakarma Avatar

      Thanks so much Maya 🤗

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    Pannaga

    Ahh! Beautiful and deep!

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    1. Poorwa Vishwakarma Avatar

      Thanks girl!!! Anyways, how are you? You weren’t active for days, I was just going to text you but glad that you’re here.

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      1. Pannaga Avatar
        Pannaga

        I’m good. Not in mood to do things. And even though I love winter, the weather is affecting me badly. So fever, low BP ( ik! Too soon) and online tests to make this season more interesting. How r you?

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      2. Poorwa Vishwakarma Avatar

        Oh I see… get well soon!
        Yeah ik, online tests… duh.
        I’m fine. Just got to know that they’re going to open schools for board students from 2nd of August, so I’m preparing for it.

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  12. Cindy Georgakas Avatar

    love this “take my hand”
    Beautiful!💖

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    1. Poorwa Vishwakarma Avatar

      Thank you so much ❤

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  13. sanjay ranout Avatar

    The day you really want to come out of it, you won’t be needing a hand ,, I think

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    1. Poorwa Vishwakarma Avatar

      Maybe, I really didn’t think of that haha

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    nofiltersattached

    This is amazing 👏. Read my blog too
    http://nofiltersattached.com/2021/07/shhh-dont-talk-about-it/ And follow my site as well.

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    mainemariee

    Beautiful 💕

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  19. Stara Avatar

    This is such a beautiful poem! Well penned! I really loved reading it. Aaaah! Ok-
    I am speechless.
    Until I read Rollercoaster Ride I hadn’t read any of your poems and they are honestly amazing! Keep writing….and I think you should post poems more often!!!

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    1. Poorwa Vishwakarma Avatar

      I’m so glad!!!
      Thanks Stara!
      Oh actually I don’t write poems that often bcuz I’m not confident with my poem writing skills yet. But thanks for the appreciation, I’ll deffo try writing more like these

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